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[Ness' Adventure Part 5]

the lack of script...

...seems evident in this flash. the art and animation were good, but I just spent several minutes watching ness jump around a cave, beat up links, and state corny lines...you should find someone who has a sense of humor to write your scripts. though, your art is pretty amazing and fluid!

[Lazer Cat Episode 1]

nice style!

the art was fitting (fix it up a little more in the next episode and it will be amazing kinda like 'there she is' mixed with 'dads home'), the animation was smooth, and it was really funny :D though things to work on include the sound and voice syncing, as well as parts that went slow like the hovering cat scene at the end which lasted a little to long.

Shadorath responds:

Awesome thanks for the constructive criticism, i agree, the sound is off by a couple seconds, my friend synced it for me and it was placed just a little bit early. At the end though, the sound is off, the sound effects you hear are from when killdroid's supposed to be breaking out of the fire hydrant. That was my fault though, lol, a dumb mistake. anyways, i will be sure to take into mind what you and everyone else has said into Lazer Cat Episode 2!

[Warrior Cat Battle]

nice to see a Warriors flash animation :D

I liked the art and animation. the backgrounds were nice too. your friends problem, though, was the sounds and voices. you couldnt understand them half the time and it was really fuzzy sounding. it was also a little cheesy and they didnt really fight like they do in the books.

wanton360 responds:

eh, I didn't help Asi make this one, I would have advised against this, the newer ones in the series are better, higher quality, and better cinematic story. This was actually line by line copied from the book practically so err...yeah

[removal 1 request]

like everyone else says...

....these are really old and unfortunately not funny. the ending was just a failed attempt at making people want to rate high and the animation was just average. I suggest getting new material next time if you plan to continue this.

[The Moon Planet]

good job!

I really like how though you just used the line tool and tweens most of the time, you used them well to create a unique style of animation. its really cute and smooth as well. and its also pretty original :D

[Kapow]

hmmm...

I feel that the lack of sound ruined this from being funny. also its just too slow and obviously predicable. I see that you do have talent but it needs a big polishing.

[Forest 2013 - Chapter 1]

it was ok

I didnt really like the art much but the animation and 3d effect are pretty cool. the sounds are all right also. just work more on the art I suppose and find a better translator lol.

[-Here comes the sun-]

nice

I like your use of angles, it makes it more professional. I also like your character designs and art. though it can be slow at times, its still a great music video

[Franken B]

ummm...

dude, not being able to watch it on firefox is a BIG problem. a lot if, not most, people use firefox so thats really going to hurt your score. I cant even view the animation, but I dont feel like giving you an undeserved 1 so I just put an in-between score for now till you fix it

Sinapi responds:

can you try once more? i put a new preloader hoping it doens`t have any problem the movie :S

[Waiting for the Bus 2]

ummm

I think your super short, get-em-out-fast movies are getting a little old and its starting to show by your score and trophy (only around 4 and your worst trophy yet -- daily fourth...) I did enjoy it, as I do all your movies, but like I said, the jokes are starting to wear out a little. some people are still saying they didnt expect it, but with you, its obviously going to be something you didnt expect so you can expect it to be something you wouldnt expect, so in the process making it expect-able. Im not sure exactly but I find this one of my least favorites.