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[Stranglechoke]

nice!

I was checking through my reviews, and I saw one I wrote awhile ago for one of your earlier movies. In it, I stated that you had potential, but I thought that you were wasting your time on it. Now I see that you took the advice on that one and made something way better and funnier! :D keep it up, I'll be looking forward to more of your stuff.

TT2wist responds:

Thank you soooo much!

[3d For your Pleasure]

wow

that was better 3d than "Clash of the Titans" had!

ScrewdriverClock responds:

I say I showed James Cameron how to do it if he ever thinks about making a sequel to Avatar.

[Superpapá (Dia del Padre)]

I like the idea

I thought this was gonna be total crap, but it turned out better than I thought. the idea is nice for a fathers day flash. the thing is though, you really need to learn to speed things up. every scene and image goes too long. cut it down a couple hundred frames. the arts ok. just keep on practicing and you'll be a top notch animator in no time! oh and for video/tv scenes like the star wars one, try to learn how to put a video clip into your animation instead of an image.

Keronitro responds:

Thanks a lot for your advice!! Really! :)
I did try to use some clips, but they wouldn't load on the swf. I'll keep trying, thanks again.

[Lazer Cat Episode 1]

nice style!

the art was fitting (fix it up a little more in the next episode and it will be amazing kinda like 'there she is' mixed with 'dads home'), the animation was smooth, and it was really funny :D though things to work on include the sound and voice syncing, as well as parts that went slow like the hovering cat scene at the end which lasted a little to long.

OmnisEntertainment responds:

Awesome thanks for the constructive criticism, i agree, the sound is off by a couple seconds, my friend synced it for me and it was placed just a little bit early. At the end though, the sound is off, the sound effects you hear are from when killdroid's supposed to be breaking out of the fire hydrant. That was my fault though, lol, a dumb mistake. anyways, i will be sure to take into mind what you and everyone else has said into Lazer Cat Episode 2!

[Warrior Cat Battle]

nice to see a Warriors flash animation :D

I liked the art and animation. the backgrounds were nice too. your friends problem, though, was the sounds and voices. you couldnt understand them half the time and it was really fuzzy sounding. it was also a little cheesy and they didnt really fight like they do in the books.

wanton360 responds:

eh, I didn't help Asi make this one, I would have advised against this, the newer ones in the series are better, higher quality, and better cinematic story. This was actually line by line copied from the book practically so err...yeah

[Franken B]

ummm...

dude, not being able to watch it on firefox is a BIG problem. a lot if, not most, people use firefox so thats really going to hurt your score. I cant even view the animation, but I dont feel like giving you an undeserved 1 so I just put an in-between score for now till you fix it

Sinapi responds:

can you try once more? i put a new preloader hoping it doens`t have any problem the movie :S

[Street Fighter Epic Ep.4]

waaay to long

at points, its like watching the arcade game screen when it says, "insert coin" and shows a lot of looped action. I liked your quality sprite animating but I got bored after the first five minutes of repeated fighting. the dialogue had a couple of errors also. just try to add more story and less fighting.

TechLeSSWaYz responds:

no no! your missing the point... its street fighter "Epic" for a reason. its for fighting not for talking lol
there isnt supose to be a big story to begin with.
thank you though

[LINK Song of Funk]

pretty good!

the art wasnt amazing but it was still pretty funny and unexpected. I liked it :D keep it up!

PostTimeskipSam responds:

Robert:
Art is a matter of opinion.

Samson:
Unless it's abstract art.

[Young Lovers]

improvement needed

it was ok at best. I didnt find it too funny, the art was lacking some, and the animation you did have in it was below average. the voices were a little on the downside as well. you do have potential, so work on your style and animation. I can see you becoming a great animator in the future if you work on improving those things.

dogsinthecathouse responds:

Thanks for the feedback. I rushed it a little, so I should have spent a little more time making the animation look better. And I know the voices sound a little demented. I have a low voice naturally and even though I can change the pitch, it's hard to make my voice sound like a kid's voice. But I'll try to work on ways I can do the voices better.