Best of the day!
I found the whole flash animation pretty cool. The art is perfect for what your going for, the voice acting was in fact brilliant, and the animation works! the only thing that could be improved is the story which could be less random. I hope you continue the series.
thank you for ur kind comment... I will try to improve the possible flaws in this one for the next one... tyvm!
appreciate ur time spent on writing this review
no offense but...
...the arts pretty bad, its not very funny, and its pretty random and long. this has potential but falls short of pleasant.
hm interresting... ok
oh happy day
with so much garbage on Negrounds, its nice to see something Christian :D work on your art and lipsinking a little though
thanks :D
i am happy it didnt get blammed because its christian!
nice to know there are more christian people on here :D
good
one of the most important things is that you keep on improving and learning and youve seemed to learn some from making this animation. its ok but the art needs improved some and you need to have more interaction going on every scene or you'll lose your audiences interest
-Art needs to be improved
-More interaction
Thanks, I'll definitely write it down and do much better!
it was ok, though...
...I dislike how much you STRESS that you made it in an hour. if you hadnt as much it might have been more enjoyable but why bother submitting it now instead of taking more time and making it longer? arts good though
stress stinks arid works
I agree, though....
I love the message though you present it rather harshly ...work on the way you present yourself.
Yeah. I admit. O.O
I focused on the dark side of teen pregnancy, I guess.
But thanks for the comment! ^^
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